Point Of View In Narrative

There are 3 types of point of view:

1) First Person

2) Second Person

3) Third Person

A First Person point of view is when the word "I" is used. This is commonly used as it is easier. It is about observing the character from his point of view
A Second Person point of view is when you use the word "You". It is not from one person's point of view anymore, but it is from the person's and the person beside him's point of view. This is not commonly used.

A Third Person point of view is when you are using the word "We". Whatever you write is from a general point of view. There is no "I" or "You" in the story. Characters are given names and not like 'me' and 'I'. We must be careful when we write in this point of view as we are not the character inside the story. So we cannot change the name form Tom to I as i am not Tom in the story.

Reflections on LA lessons covered so far

I have learnt many meaningful things this year. I learnt that dialogues are important and are often added to make it more lively. Proper plotting is required to make the story interesting for the reader to read. I find that having a word limit of 500 is hard to handle. Most of the time i accidentally over shoot the amount and in the end need to edit it. However i feel this is good as it teaches us not to be too long winded.

I also find that the technique "show but not tell" hard. I have problem in that as i usually tell and not show. I find that the group works during class are very fun as we can discuss different ideas with our classmates and have different points on them.

Term 1 Week 5: (Weekend Assignment)

Using one of the photo that you chose in week 4 assignment, describe the scene in the photo. Your description should include similes, metaphors and personifications in your description. Your description should be about 200 words in length.

The track is oval in shape, four hundred meters in length, with four lanes. It is an all-weather running track covered by a synthetic weather resistant running surface made of rubber. The stunning red track is forms a great contrast to the azure blue sky. In the centre is a green grassy field used for field events like discus throwing and javelin. The track is like our life journey. The starting line is the start of our life while the finishing line is the goal or target to achieve in our life. The runners take off when the whistle is blown is like getting off to a good start in life. The runner needs to keep in his lane and not cross lane, just like in life, we need to focus on our path to success and not cross over boundaries unnecessarily. Over the years, the track is stained by countless amount of blood and sweat of the athletes and it bathes in the rain. Over the years, the track has seen many athletes being developed to their full potential and has witnessed many events, races and competitions. It has been a great companion to all the athletes.

Week 4 weekend assignment

This week, you are required to take photos of your favourite part in the school campus or your neighbourhood. Upload your photos in your blog and write a 200 word long explanation on the reasons why the place means so much to you and how it links to your identity.

The photo I chose is the running track of HCI. It is of a world class standard with all the facilities like javelin run-up, high jump mat and the long jump pit. Being part of the Track And Field school team, I have training almost every day, including weekends. Apart from the classroom, the track is where I spend most of my afternoons at. It is where I suffer all my injuries during training. I still remember once when I over strained my quadriceps so badly that the doctor excused me from training for three weeks. During that period of recuperation, time seemed like eternity. I missed the track badly and could not wait to resume my training. Last year was the final year for the combined sports meet between Nanyang and Hwa Chong to be held at the track before it was torn down to give way for the construction of the MRT station. I participated in the many events and won some medals. It was an unforgettable experience. The track has now been reinstated but of a smaller scale, from eight lanes to four lanes. I love the track so much that it is the place where all my sweat and blood is shed.

Characterisation: Story excerpt

Jackie Chan is a renowned kungfu actor. Famous for his trademark over-sized nose, he was stout with thick powerful arms. His burly chest heaved and fell with each breath he drew and let out. He always give his best to make the movie exciting displaying all his fighting stunts. In his movies, whenever friends are in trouble, he will save them no matter what even at the risk of his own life. When fighting with the bullies, Jackie Chan does not think before he acts as his anger gets the better over him. Therefore he often gets into trouble. He would create his own stunts to amaze others. Despite his injuries inflicted during filming, he continues practicing. He holds the record for the most number of stunts ever done by a living actor. Even though he had a hard childhood, he persevered and continued to strive for a better future. Now he has achieved his goals and has left a mark in his career! Though he has amassed a fortune, he has not forgotten to contribute back to the society. He has a heart of gold as he donates generously to charities and the underprivileged. What a role model!!